I think that what you posted was actually very logical. But, consider this, what if you were to write a awesome title? I ain't saying your information is not good, however suppose you added a post title that grabbed folk's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little vanilla. You could glance at Yahoo's front page and watch how they write post headlines to grab viewers to open the links. You might add a video or a related picture or two to get readers interested about everything've got to say. Just my opinion, it could bring your posts a little bit more interesting.